Text: Cooling
We Are What We Share
We are what we see,
We are what we hear,
We are what we feel,
We are what we share,
We are pieces of each other.
Poetry is a form of communication. Reading and writing poetry helps me to process my experiences and to make sense of this World.
Creative commons encourages sharing. Originality comes from how one responds to another's work and what it prompts one to create.
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Your words are in my head as I clean the shower,
' When this day is gone I shall
put my face against something cool, perhaps some tin
shed out of the light, and not think...'
The drudgery of a banal dreaded chore is relieved
by your sweet words.
I place my forehead against a tile
and feel the coolness that you speak of.
' I shall
roll my cheeks against it or the back of my head, and
let the zinc etch its mottle standard and mend me, while
I smoke
Open my mouth, inhale nebulae and expel dust.
( just to see it unrolling its blanket tongue
on the undiscovered mattress of dark).'
When the blue hour arrives the bats fly overhead
Making their way to their nightly roost.
I watch them disappear into the undiscovered mattress of dark
you speak of.
I am mended by the cool calmness of night.
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27.06.09 — jhollinger
congratulations on your being chosen as runner up. This is really good work and very inspirational.
30.03.09 — Finland
Thankyou to the judges for choosing my work as a runner up and thanks to the Pool team and to Caleb Cluff for his beautiful poem Dog smoking. I was very excited when I read that my work had been chosen as a runner up. Receiving this positive feedback is very encouraging.
30.03.09 — Rossco
Well done on taking out the Runner Up vote in the Pooling Ideas comp for this work.Its brilliant to say the least.
Cheers
Rossco