Text: on fine white grains
is it obvious – that first shiver
toes and water
jumping,
slow waves
capsizing a soft drink can
beneath flickers of dawn
that I like it here, this kind of place
empty but of one booming
voice,
and the faintest shadow
of ships on the horizon
is it obvious that even little
corpses of crabs
hold some thin magic
here?
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23.10.09 — Gretchen Miller
a thin magic. great imagery
30.10.09 — ashleycapes
thank you, Gretchen! glad it caught your eye!
21.10.09 — GB
That last stanza is excellent, and the capsizing soft drink can - very observant. Good one Ashley - love it.
30.10.09 — ashleycapes
Thanks Gabrielle! I seem to be attracted to debris of all sorts when I'm out walking!