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  • Title: my_dad_eye
  • Length: 6:35 minutes (9.03 MB)
  • Format: Stereo 44kHz 192Kbps (CBR)
  • Stats: , 0 downloads, 66 plays
My _ Dad_ Eye

Audio: My _ Dad_ Eye

from surfingbridge, 13.10.08

This piece is all rights reserved because of the personal nature of the piece so would prefer not to open it to the forum. Also it is a completed file.

Tuesday, April 1, 2008

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    05.11.08 — surfingbridge

    Ok cool Thanks Nicole. I'll

    Ok cool Thanks Nicole. I'll get rid of the script.
    I trust you received copy the other day?
    Best, Bridget

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    28.10.08 — surfingbridge

    Ok will do. It will be one

    Ok will do. It will be one my missions for wed 29.10.08
    Best, Bridget

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    02.11.08 — Nicole Steinke

    Hi Bridget - I forgot to

    Hi Bridget - I forgot to mention earlier, I think the story is stronger if you don't give it all away in the script. Let the twists and turns take us by surprise. And definitely don't put a backannouncement there for people to read before they've heard the piece! I don't know if the script wasn't there when I first listened, or if I just failed to read it, but your story was more moving for taking me to unexpected places.
    Best
    Nicole

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    28.10.08 — surfingbridge

    Sherre & Nicole Thanks for

    Sherre & Nicole
    Thanks for the compliments. I know you just put the #2 sampler together. But would you still like this piece? I only have this final copy as I lost all the earlier tracks.. dodgy USB's at fault there... I can drop it over in hard copy if you like this/next week?
    Best, Bridget

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    28.10.08 — Nicole Steinke

    Hi Bridget - there'll be one

    Hi Bridget - there'll be one last sampler and we haven't decided content of it yet so please do drop it over. It's a very strong story you've told.

    Put it in a nice secure package labelled:

    For Collection by Nicole Steinke, Street Stories, ABC RN. Phone: x 1428

    and make sure they call me on that number when you drop it off so that it doesn't disappear into the depths of our internal mail service. It might take years to reappear...

    All the best
    Nicole

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    14.10.08 — Nicole Steinke

    You're a strong family and

    You're a strong family and this is an outstanding story you've told of the situation your father finds himself in. As Sherre wrote earlier, the simplicity of the telling is a very effective tool in revealing the heart of the story. The music is also an unexpected way into its pain.

    Have you kept your original sound files? I hope so because we may ask you if we can broadcast this piece in our next My Street Sampler on Street Stories. We like to work from original mix files rather than the finished render so that we can tweak fades a little, etc, but you've done a great job.
    nicole

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    13.10.08 — Sherre DeLys

    The simplicity of the

    The simplicity of the telling allows this story to let the feeling come through. Thanks for sharing this moving account, and good luck to your dad and your family.

    Sherre

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